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Author's Note: I'm not well in english, so there could be some mistakes. Please don't type rude comments. Also this is my very first reader-insert. Give this noobie some slack.
Disclaimer: Hetalia characters; France,Spain, prussia and 2pGermany.You...etc
Previously
"....they made it...my babies...my angels...".

Everything went blank but before you completely fell unconscious, you saw you're kittens hugging you then you felt yourself being lifted away.
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"Mommy! Help us!"
"Ma merè where are you?!"

You were running to the cries of you're babies, You could see you're babies on the wet street but no matter how fast you ran they just Keeped getting farther and farther away.

"Children! Can you hear me?! Please see me I'm over here!", you called out to them but they still couldn't hear you. Suddenly the German Shepard appeared behind them and bite them down , lacerating some parts of their body with his now bloody teeth, laughing as he devours you're babies.
"NOOOOOOO! Aaaaaaah!"

You woke up.

You looked around frantically, you're surroundings were unfamiliar. The last place you remembered was being on the cold concrete road and having heavy rain beat down on yore form but now you were in a darkened room not to too dark because a couple of rose scented were lit, you were on a king size bed with red silk sheets and at least dozens of decorated pillows.

" where am I? Where are my babies-Ouch! My stomach!", you flinched then looked at you're stomach. It was  wrapped with medicine soaked cotton balls and gauze to hold them in place. You looked at the window. The rain was still beating done roughly even more than before.

"Hahaha! We're gonna get you Mr.awesome!"
"Keskeskes! Never!"
"Okay niñas, how do you say "I love you" in Spanish?"
"TE AMO!"

The voices. You're babies!. You dashed out the door through the opening, ran down the stairs despite the pain it gave you. Finally as you stepped on the first floor, you peeked you're head to see you're babies. You're heart filled with joy and relief. The sight before you was adorable.
Claude and René were tackling an albino cat with red eyes, you're two girls, Angel and Joliee were learning Spanish for a light brown cat and what made you almost go gaga was Seeing you're little one, Finnian cuddly with a long white haired cat near the fire.

" how are you feeling finnie?"
"Im okay now, thank yo-merci beacoup!...but I miss mother"

You spoke up." I'm here darling",you smiled tenderly at you're petit boy.
His eyes shined bright at the sight HIS angel. Mother.all of you're children stopped what they were doing and ran to you but beware of you're injury. You nuzzled each of them, telling them how much you love and miss them.

"So you are the lovely mother that these children told us about", said Spaincat. you looked up at him and giggled.
" yes, I am their mother. Thank you so much for keeping my babies safe you have no idea how much this means to me first something happened to the father, I can't even remember what he looked like, all I remember was having my babies under a dog house. I stayed there till the owner found us and took us in but soon he couldn't anymore and he moved away with out us, I've done so much for my children, I stole, I lied ...I'm just happy that 3 angels were sent to help me".
The NekoBTT astonished , the story you just said saddened their hearts but then their hearts sang. You called them angels. How sweet.

The NekoBTT blushed. Well except for Prussiacat who smirked and stood proud.

"Ma Cherie, you're injury is very great but our owners say you can stay as long as you need" said Francat.

Claude stood on his back paws," Ma merè can we stay here please?! It's so magnifque here!"

You didn't need to think about it, you knew this was a safe haven for you but most of all for you're angels.

"Yes, my dear we can stay",you smiled tenderly.

The kittens, including the NekoBtt cheered and think about the wonderful adventures they'll have together.

To be Continued...Maybe
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: Your here~

Sorry to keep you guys waiting and that this chapter is pretty short. ^^;

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dawnfangs-art Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Is this going to be continued? (Just asking)
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Student Digital Artist
At this point, yes. I didn't expect this to get popular. I'll finish it before Febuary ends.
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dawnfangs-art Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
Ok lol my only story I made managed to get around 40 or 50 views within a couple or few days I was thinking no one would actually read it but I guess not since I checked today and only to see around 80 views (I feel proud since it's my first story I've made)

And keep up the great work

P.S - I can send you the link if you want.
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icejuliet314 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Please continue! It's too good to be left unfinished.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Student Digital Artist
I need to post a link to part four XD it's on DA
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icejuliet314 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Oh really?! That's awesome!
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Bamboobird123 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2016  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Plz continue it; it's really good
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hi-chewy123 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2015
Will there be more? It's soooooo goooddd~~~~!!! I went and search through the gallery, but I found nothing..... (¡·¡)
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Its there don´t worry XD I´ll make more soon
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hi-chewy123 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2015
Ok thank you
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AmeliaUchihaKuchiki Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015
MAKE A PART 4!!!!!!!!!! MAKE ONE!!!!!!! orig15.deviantart.net/69ab/f/2…
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD already did, you have to find it!
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AmeliaUchihaKuchiki Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015
seriously?!?!??!! Dangatang! Can't you just post a link! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!?
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Nope sorry ^^' 
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MiKriDreams Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
aww there's no part 4!!! T_T PEARL FANGIRLS OVER SOMETHING (Now animated) plz hurry 
just DO IT!!! 
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Angel06123 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2015
Where's the fourth part??? I can't find it in the gallery!! 
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Angel06123 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 19, 2015
That sent me to a whole different story! XD
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Oooooh! Sorry hon XD yeah...um part is not real ^^' sorry
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Angel06123 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
NOOOOO!!! At least the story was amazing while it lasted! You're an amazing writer!! Thanks for telling me though! Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] 
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Dont worry i would never leave story hanging XD it will finish 
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XxXxDeaththegirlxXxX Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nooooo TT A TT there must be more 
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Student Digital Artist
theres a 4th one in my gallery XD
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XxXxDeaththegirlxXxX Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im on moblie and don't even know i access it
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EODragonkitty201 Featured By Owner May 1, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Plaese continue Its ok if you don't
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poisonkitty67 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015
Please continue!!! I love it so much!!
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sweetsassycat Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
more pleaseeeBunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4] France (Begging to England) [V3] Katt Beg emoticon i really love it  so far
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Sherlockedandproud Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue! Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
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thehetalian17 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
Love this story!!!! I want more!
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Pitchblackofnight456 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
Please please please please please please pleeeeeaaaassse part 4!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!
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iloveanimewhatwhat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
please update soon!!!
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
I feel like I've commented on this story before but I don't remember. It's still cute though so who cares!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Aw Thank you! :heart:
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
You're welcome! It's adorable!
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
This is adorable and I hope there will be more sometime! And aww I get that Chibitalia reference at the end~
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Randapayne Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thank you! :heart:
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Randapayne Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome. Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
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katcraft455 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(Cue thor voice)
This fanfic...
I like it..
ANOTHER!
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Warriorsfan382 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Where is the like button when you need it?!~
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katcraft455 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I feel you
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poplope Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
i need more!!!
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katalovesgamez Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Artist
more please I need
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
To be Continued...Maybe

Me: that reminds me of chibitalia!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Tehe! Xd
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CandyCrashCourse Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Awwwwww so cute! Damn that german sheperd jesus he is bloody nasty
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Make one more please.... :iconhyperplz: :iconbegplz:
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DarkEcila Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
More please this is so cute
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I'll try to type it this weekend :D
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