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Author's Note: I'm not well in english, so there could be some mistakes. Please don't type rude comments. Also this is my very first reader-insert. Give this noobie some slack.
Disclaimer: Hetalia characters; France,Spain, prussia and 2pGermany.You...etc
Previously
"....they made it...my babies...my angels...".

Everything went blank but before you completely fell unconscious, you saw you're kittens hugging you then you felt yourself being lifted away.
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"Mommy! Help us!"
"Ma merè where are you?!"

You were running to the cries of you're babies, You could see you're babies on the wet street but no matter how fast you ran they just Keeped getting farther and farther away.

"Children! Can you hear me?! Please see me I'm over here!", you called out to them but they still couldn't hear you. Suddenly the German Shepard appeared behind them and bite them down , lacerating some parts of their body with his now bloody teeth, laughing as he devours you're babies.
"NOOOOOOO! Aaaaaaah!"

You woke up.

You looked around frantically, you're surroundings were unfamiliar. The last place you remembered was being on the cold concrete road and having heavy rain beat down on yore form but now you were in a darkened room not to too dark because a couple of rose scented were lit, you were on a king size bed with red silk sheets and at least dozens of decorated pillows.

" where am I? Where are my babies-Ouch! My stomach!", you flinched then looked at you're stomach. It was  wrapped with medicine soaked cotton balls and gauze to hold them in place. You looked at the window. The rain was still beating done roughly even more than before.

"Hahaha! We're gonna get you Mr.awesome!"
"Keskeskes! Never!"
"Okay niñas, how do you say "I love you" in Spanish?"
"TE AMO!"

The voices. You're babies!. You dashed out the door through the opening, ran down the stairs despite the pain it gave you. Finally as you stepped on the first floor, you peeked you're head to see you're babies. You're heart filled with joy and relief. The sight before you was adorable.
Claude and René were tackling an albino cat with red eyes, you're two girls, Angel and Joliee were learning Spanish for a light brown cat and what made you almost go gaga was Seeing you're little one, Finnian cuddly with a long white haired cat near the fire.

" how are you feeling finnie?"
"Im okay now, thank yo-merci beacoup!...but I miss mother"

You spoke up." I'm here darling",you smiled tenderly at you're petit boy.
His eyes shined bright at the sight HIS angel. Mother.all of you're children stopped what they were doing and ran to you but beware of you're injury. You nuzzled each of them, telling them how much you love and miss them.

"So you are the lovely mother that these children told us about", said Spaincat. you looked up at him and giggled.
" yes, I am their mother. Thank you so much for keeping my babies safe you have no idea how much this means to me first something happened to the father, I can't even remember what he looked like, all I remember was having my babies under a dog house. I stayed there till the owner found us and took us in but soon he couldn't anymore and he moved away with out us, I've done so much for my children, I stole, I lied ...I'm just happy that 3 angels were sent to help me".
The NekoBTT astonished , the story you just said saddened their hearts but then their hearts sang. You called them angels. How sweet.

The NekoBTT blushed. Well except for Prussiacat who smirked and stood proud.

"Ma Cherie, you're injury is very great but our owners say you can stay as long as you need" said Francat.

Claude stood on his back paws," Ma merè can we stay here please?! It's so magnifque here!"

You didn't need to think about it, you knew this was a safe haven for you but most of all for you're angels.

"Yes, my dear we can stay",you smiled tenderly.

The kittens, including the NekoBtt cheered and think about the wonderful adventures they'll have together.

To be Continued...Maybe
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: Your here~

Sorry to keep you guys waiting and that this chapter is pretty short. ^^;

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sweetsassycat Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2015
more pleaseeeBunny Emoji-80 (Pretty Please) [V4] France (Begging to England) [V3] Katt Beg emoticon i really love it  so far
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Sherlockedandproud Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Please continue! Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] 
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thehetalian17 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014
Love this story!!!! I want more!
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DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconmoarplz::iconbegplz:
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:iconpitchblackofnight456:
Please please please please please please pleeeeeaaaassse part 4!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!
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iloveanimewhatwhat Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014
please update soon!!!
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
I feel like I've commented on this story before but I don't remember. It's still cute though so who cares!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Aw Thank you! :heart:
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014
You're welcome! It's adorable!
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Romacat Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014
This is adorable and I hope there will be more sometime! And aww I get that Chibitalia reference at the end~
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Randapayne Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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Randapayne Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome. Lovely Shoujo (Heart for you) [V3] 
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katcraft455 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(Cue thor voice)
This fanfic...
I like it..
ANOTHER!
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Warriorsfan382 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Where is the like button when you need it?!~
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katcraft455 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I feel you
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poplope Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Student General Artist
i need more!!!
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katalovesgamez Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Artist
more please I need
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MixedMuttNeko-Chan Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
To be Continued...Maybe

Me: that reminds me of chibitalia!
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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Student General Artist
Tehe! Xd
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CandyCrashCourse Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2013
Awwwwww so cute! Damn that german sheperd jesus he is bloody nasty
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BBlover01 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Make one more please.... :iconhyperplz: :iconbegplz:
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DarkEcila Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
More please this is so cute
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student General Artist
I'll try to type it this weekend :D
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highpurple3323 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
i think i died when i read this one please make part four when you said to be continued maybe i died even more its just so cute

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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sorry I'm having a really bad art block for this but ill try !! :D
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highpurple3323 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013
dont i believe in you 
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Akina0317 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What do you mean maybe, you must continued
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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Student General Artist
In sorry I'm trying but I'm lacking ideas 
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Akina0317 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's okay
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LittleDevil1009 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
D'aaaw I just died. Good job
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!
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LittleDevil1009 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013
No prob ^_^)
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DreamingHetalia101 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can't wait for part 4!!
And I have a sneaking supspicion who their father is.....:iconplanningplz:
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dark-winged-kitsune Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
continue this please!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I will :)
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dark-winged-kitsune Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya~
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hottygirl101 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student General Artist
MOAWR~
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SolarChaser Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
D:
I can't wait a month...
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LivixDidi Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This is so adorable (: i hope you do continue it!! <3
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Student General Artist
I will when school is over, which is in a month :D
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LivixDidi Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ugh xD lol ok i shall be patient for this cute story!!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2013  Student General Artist
Aw thank you :) ill do my best to upload at least 2 chapters instead of one
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LivixDidi Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That would be awesome :D ((i see your a fan of Adventure Time xD))
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student General Artist
Yes :) XD
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LivixDidi Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome xD
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SUGARRUSH12 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PLEASE CONTINUE IT PLEASE
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Akuma0013 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
:iconrainbowdroolplz: :iconmoarplz:
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Ill try I still have writers block with this one
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BloodyxNightmair Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013
The only thing I can say is...... HGNNNNNN!
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