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Author's Note: I'm not well in english, so there could be some mistakes. Please don't type rude comments. Also this is my very first reader-insert. Give this noobie some slack.

Disclaimer: Hetalia characters; France,Spain, prussia and 2pGermany.You...etc
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~Previously~
" I underestimated you fräulein, you did quite a number on me...but I can still fight!", as he says that, he runs toward despite his leg. But before he could get half way near you, he tripped and slide till he reached you. The impacted left the German sheltered unconscious. While it made you sore because his body clashed with yours.
"Gah!", you coughed up tiny drops of blood. You scooted away from the German shepherd.
You took all the energy you had left and limped away from the knocked out dog.
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-With the kittens-

" But how are we going to get it?!",asked Angel.

Claude then ran to the front door and started scratching and whining.
Soon Angel and René got the idea and started doing the same.while Joliee keeps Finnian warm.

-inside the mansion-

The famous bad touch trio were having a little party just for them selves since they were suspended from their favorite bar for 3 months. But that never stopped them from partying. As the trio ate and drank in the kitchen, 3 cats were in the living room enjoying themselves by the fire with a large plat of tuna and crab legs.

"Mmmmmmm~ I don't think I can eat another bite!...okay maybe one more", said the brown fur and green-eyed cat known as spaincat as he scarfs down another tuna piece.

"You are going to get so fat! Unlike ze awesome me who can never get fat! Keskeskeskes!!", said a red-eyed cat.

"Not from where I am looking, mon ami~", grinned Francat

"Vhy you?!-"

Scratch-scratch....Meooooow!

All 3 cats ears perked up. At the same time they looked over at the door.after a short pause.

"Meoooow!....help! Please! "
"Let us in!"
" Achoo-o!!!"

All of them gasped( except for the human BTT).

"It sounds like-"
" a litter!-"
"Of kinder*!!!!"

They all dashed to the door, Prussiacat got next to the door while Francat stood of his back paws on top and held Spaincat with his front paws while he used his front paws to try and turn the gold door knob.

"Hey! Ze awesome Prussiacat is getting a hernia! Hurry up!", whined the albino cat.
"I'm trying! Amigo! Remember we have no thumbs!"

Click!

"Got it!", they all opened the door. What they saw broke their hearts.
These kittens were nothing but skin and bones, their eyes showed sadness and fatigue, Francat looked toward Joliee,who had her little brother under her.

Francat immediately pushed the kittens inside.the kittens didnt wasted a nano-second running inside, Spaincat took Finnian by the neck and carried him to the fire place, letting Finnian cuddle him.

Spaincat started gushing over the cuteness," Awwwww! You remind of Romano! When he was just un bebe!",he said while nuzzling Finnian, who didn't seem to mind at all with this unknown cat keeping him warm.

Francat pushed the plate over to the children.
"Here you are children! Please si'l vous plait eat as much as you want!",he said to them.
The kittens attacked that plat like if they were jaguars in the jungle attacking their prey.
Claude stopped eating his crab leg and looked up at Francat.
Claude and Francat looked so much alike! It was like Francat looking back in time and see himself as a child.

"Excuse-moi Monsieur? Parlez-vous français?",Claude asked ecstatically.Francat gasped.
"Oui! Mon jeune homme!".

Prussiacat facefloored." Vonderbar! Another francy-pants talker!".

Achoo-o!

"FINNIAN!",yelled all of his older siblings.they quickly rushed over to him,kissing him,cuddling him,anything to let him know that everything is okay.finally he had enough energy to speak but his voice was still a bit rasp.

"Where's...mo...mommy?"

-with you-

It's over.

That's what you thought,this was how you were going to die.
You were so weak, you're stomach was so badly injured that each step you took drops of blood dripped from you're mouth. You started thinking of you're kittens, you're blessings from heaven. Are they okay? Did they find the home? Did that grotesque German Shepard find them?!. All these questions rushed around yours mind, tears started to form, you couldn't take it. You began whining loudly screaming you're heart out.

" My babies! Claude! Angel! René! Joliee! Finnian! Please be alright! Please be safe! Where are you!?", you whined and cried.You never got a chance to see if you're children found the home, never see them grow up, never telling that their father is-

"Ma merè! "
"Mama!"
"Mother!
"Mommy!"

You turned you're head to the sound of you're kittens. You couldn't believe they were alright! But you saw 3 extra cats.

"....they made it...my babies...my angels...".

Everything went blank but before you completely fell unconscious, you saw you're kittens hugging you then you felt yourself being lifted away.

To be continued...
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: Your here~
Part 3: [link]

~EDIT~....Im speechless!!!!!!!!! You guys are AWESOME thanks for the 50 faves, comments and Watches!!!! Im so happy!
I love feedback, the more the sooner I update.I don't continue a story that no one reads.

Here's part 2~

Please like I said before.

KINDLY point out mistakes. No rude comments. Thank you :D
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Kirychan1226 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Student Digital Artist
this made me cry. :iconlazycryplz:
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:iconxxcanadianfrenchiexx:
tears why you do this to my feels? WHY!???Tomoyo Sakagami (Crying) [V3] 
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz: IM SORRY!!! ;_;
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2014  Student Writer
FUCK FUCK FUCK!!!!
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LunaGamerImInPortal Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2014  Student General Artist
Ffffffeeeellllsssss
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Lunabug999 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013
More please! Love it!
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Billie-san Featured By Owner May 31, 2013
awwwwweeeee, so adorable with the kittens and the btt-cats xDD I really liked the comment with the 'remember with have no thumbs', so amusing xDD
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner May 31, 2013  Student General Artist
Glad you find it funny :)
I've never written funny stuff XD
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:iconbillie-san:
Billie-san Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
really not? you are a natural in funny stuff :3
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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Student General Artist
Aw thank you :)
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Billie-san Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013
anytime :3
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stingfish101 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOVE this. :D
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :D
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stingfish101 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm such a fail.. :iconfacewallplz:
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013  Student General Artist
Y?
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stingfish101 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I sent it to the wrong person. <3>
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Student General Artist
S'alright!
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stingfish101 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah. =-=
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:33 < *this is pawsibbly one of the most adorable stories i ever read*
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
Awww thank you :)
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:33 < *thank you fur the wonderfurr story*
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Student General Artist
:iconletmehugyouplz:
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SofiaWerewolf Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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misscheeseycake Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012
MORE PLEASE!
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD awwwwww
"I'm trying! Amigo! Remember we have no thumbs!" lmao u almost killed me when i read this plus how doesnt the trio knowtic that there cats r so awesome
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2012  Student General Artist
I guess there usually drunk when their cats do something cool!
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tthe13th Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
...wait i though they were always drunk as is...
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SnowPuppy05 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
where'd you find that picture? owo :love:
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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Google. The keyword was nekotalia France :)
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SnowPuppy05 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
i can't find it ; A ;
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TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:iconheplz: i see what happend
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:iconartisan-garden:
Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Eh? See what?
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TheMysteriousPoet Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
the kit and francis. :iconheplz: i see wht you did there!
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh lol :)
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ItalianFatCurl Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
<3
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Eclipse2warriorcats Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
I cant wait for the next part i am so into this storry *squeeeeeeee*
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
:D
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Eclipse2warriorcats Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
^^
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aibi0608 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012  Student
nyoo~~~!!!! there's gotta be something else happening besides death :'(

and francis was about to find out those precious kittens

and it was getting good too
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Don't worry :) it's not over. Trust me its very far from being over.
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IKingFisher Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2012
I haven't read part 1, but this is interesting and has some good dialogue... especially if you're not very strong in english.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Really? I thought it was pretty average.thanks :).Yeah I wish I could be stronger in English but having a forgetful memory makes it quite difficult, I'd like to have added more advanced words.
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IKingFisher Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Don't worry about using advanced words, many of the best English classics have been done in the simplest terms...


I'm always impressed by people who speak multiple languages, I've practised writing in my language since childhood, when someone not only learns it but then feels comfortable writing in it it's impressive regardless of word use.
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
Oh? I've usually been told that advanced wording is the best way to read.
I love French! That is until I had gotten a teacher whom I wasn't comfortable with his method.but I still try. I don't speak it well but when it comes to reading and writing I'm alright.
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IKingFisher Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
Advanced wording is good at expressing complexity, and perhaps good for learning. but often simple gets the message across best is you're writing it.


Wait...you're not only good at English but better then me at french? Now I feel terrible, I'm Canadian and most of us can't even write or read our other national language ^^;
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
So true, I sometimes find it entertaining to try and figure out what they are trying to say but when I can't I just beg my teacher to tell :D
Oh! Don't feel bad I'm a Latino but born in American and I can barley keep up a conversation with my family plus reading in Spanish is Sortave harde for me but I try. So I know how you feel :)
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IKingFisher Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012
:) thanks, keep it up, you'll get the hang of them eventually and then you'll have a great sense of language
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Artisan-Garden Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2012  Student General Artist
I pray for that :) , to you aswell if you like I can scan some of the stories and lessons my teacher gives us. Once you read them it's easy to understand.
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